The Read The Fucking FAQ Review

Cutie!
Okay, this sprite is pretty good. Only things I can see is 1) That ‘gradient’ effect on the horns is not shown in troll sprites, so you might want to give them hard edges- also the colors look washed out? And 2) I’d recommend opening up that brown overshirt to expose a black shirt underneath with the symbol big and bold on it.

Name: Mesani Arkhar 
Species: Troll
Gender: Female
Age: 6 sweeps
chumHandle: curlyCuddler [CC]
Quirk: Excellent grammar, spelling, and puncuation, but overuses puns and replaces the ‘boa’, ‘bo’, or ‘ba’ sound with ‘baaa’.
Blood: Lime green
Guardian: A large, big-horned ram
Interests: Weaving
Dislikes: Breaking rules
Ancestor: The Enslaved

Sprite: Ramsprite
Associated Element(s): Rock
Land: Land of Cliffs and Clouds
Title: Maid of Heart

Your name is Mesani Arkhar, and today is your wriggling day! 

Your hive is higher up than most trolls’- in fact, it rests on a mountain! It’s a cozy little cabin, and stays nice and warm even in a blizzard- something pretty common. There’s always an excess of mountain woolbeasts living around your hive, and they (along with your lovely lusus!) provide the wool for your weaving.

You enjoy weaving very, very much! You spend hours on end weaving blankets and rugs, along with various other odds and ends, like sweaters. Sometimes you use the Internet to order finer cloths like silk, velvet, or satin, so that you may cater to the highbloods on Alternia. They always expect the finest clothing from you, and the finest clothing requires the finest cloth, right?

To be honestly, highbloods, especially the really high ones, scare you. They’re all so strong and powerful…While you’re a meek little lamb. They could crush you like a bug if you misbehaved! Of course, you wouldn’t dream of misbehaving or ignoring orders. Even if they were weaker than you, it’s still the natural order of things, right? You are an inferior lime blood, while they have beautiful blue and purple blood! 

Your strife specibus is needlekind, and your fetch modus is the thread rack modus, which requires your items to be organized by color. 

Your ancestor is the Enslaved, who lived and died a slave of the highbloods, and your lusus is a large mountain ram with large, curly horns. 

Your title is the Maid of Heart, and your land is the Land of Cliffs and Clouds. You also happen to be a Prospit dreamer.

Your chumHandle is curlyCuddler [CC], and ewe try to speak clearly and precisely, so that ewer clients can easily understand ewe, but ewe seemed to have picked up some baaaaad habits from ewer lusus.
What will you do?

Wow, excellent! Nitpicks on the sprite aside, this is an excellent put-together character! A+, my friend.
-M
  • Cutie!
  • Okay, this sprite is pretty good. Only things I can see is 1) That ‘gradient’ effect on the horns is not shown in troll sprites, so you might want to give them hard edges- also the colors look washed out? And 2) I’d recommend opening up that brown overshirt to expose a black shirt underneath with the symbol big and bold on it.
Name: Mesani Arkhar
Species: Troll
Gender: Female
Age: 6 sweeps
chumHandle: curlyCuddler [CC]
Quirk: Excellent grammar, spelling, and puncuation, but overuses puns and replaces the ‘boa’, ‘bo’, or ‘ba’ sound with ‘baaa’.
Blood: Lime green
Guardian: A large, big-horned ram
Interests: Weaving
Dislikes: Breaking rules
Ancestor: The Enslaved

Sprite: Ramsprite
Associated Element(s): Rock
Land: Land of Cliffs and Clouds
Title: Maid of Heart

Your name is Mesani Arkhar, and today is your wriggling day!

Your hive is higher up than most trolls’- in fact, it rests on a mountain! It’s a cozy little cabin, and stays nice and warm even in a blizzard- something pretty common. There’s always an excess of mountain woolbeasts living around your hive, and they (along with your lovely lusus!) provide the wool for your weaving.

You enjoy weaving very, very much! You spend hours on end weaving blankets and rugs, along with various other odds and ends, like sweaters. Sometimes you use the Internet to order finer cloths like silk, velvet, or satin, so that you may cater to the highbloods on Alternia. They always expect the finest clothing from you, and the finest clothing requires the finest cloth, right?

To be honestly, highbloods, especially the really high ones, scare you. They’re all so strong and powerful…While you’re a meek little lamb. They could crush you like a bug if you misbehaved! Of course, you wouldn’t dream of misbehaving or ignoring orders. Even if they were weaker than you, it’s still the natural order of things, right? You are an inferior lime blood, while they have beautiful blue and purple blood!

Your strife specibus is needlekind, and your fetch modus is the thread rack modus, which requires your items to be organized by color.

Your ancestor is the Enslaved, who lived and died a slave of the highbloods, and your lusus is a large mountain ram with large, curly horns.

Your title is the Maid of Heart, and your land is the Land of Cliffs and Clouds. You also happen to be a Prospit dreamer.

Your chumHandle is curlyCuddler [CC], and ewe try to speak clearly and precisely, so that ewer clients can easily understand ewe, but ewe seemed to have picked up some baaaaad habits from ewer lusus.

What will you do?
  • Wow, excellent! Nitpicks on the sprite aside, this is an excellent put-together character! A+, my friend.
  • -M
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